Monday, May 4, 2009



Here's draft three! I think it still needs some work...but hopefully the main points are more clear and cohesive?? Comments are much appreciated!!
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  1. Mike WeschMay 4, 2009 at 11:24 AM

    need context for first speakers ... tell us who they are and why they are speaking (show them if possibile)

    the text seems weaker than imagery might be ... (and it is hard to read one thing and listen to another) Can you find some imagery that shows us what you are saying instead?

    Show us some "attitudes" etc. That should be fairly easy.

    You might check out Greta's as a good example of an "illustrated vlog" style. http://anthrotrekker.wordpress.com/2009/05/04/getting-there/

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  2. LetterZMay 4, 2009 at 3:05 PM

    I know it's a PAIN to re-do such a great vlog/voiceover, but it would be SO great if you had a different shirt on each time you cut to a new clip of you talking. Especially if those shirts have obvious name-brands on them. It's subtle, but it would really drive your points home.

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  3. Mike WeschMay 5, 2009 at 9:16 AM

    Cool idea, Katie.

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  4. tiny.swifterMay 5, 2009 at 10:52 AM

    few ideas for an "illustrated vlog": a good way that you can figure out how to add imagery (i.e. stills and video) is to pull out the main concepts you are talking about(e.g. loosing ourselves, connecting, etc.) and thinking about how you visualize those things...wires connecting, video of people looking around for something, things like that. does this make sense? your message is great and the vlog is super, you are articulating great ideas here...lemme know if you want help with imagery stuff, it's my fave! (flickr is great for stills and if you advance search you can specify creative commons stuff :)*

    ps~ love the t-shirt change idea too~

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