here's the second draft...finally! it still needs some tweaking, I think I might change the music and work on the timing a little more. But I think all the ideas I want are in there! I might also add some more visuals besides me talking...or more text. We'll see. Let me know what you think!!
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Does a true self or true wants exist? Might want to flash facebook pics or other pictures during your blog talk around 4:00 minutes. I think you need to gear you focus in one place. You talk about relationship to others, than flattering yourself through media and media trying to flatter the person. Or need to make better connections between them because you have good points with all of them they just aren't meshing well.
ReplyDelete